There is a significant quality gap between initial machine-translated (MTL) versions and dedicated fan-translated versions. Seeking the "better" version often implies looking for a human-verified English translation Visual Improvements:
Here is a of the original work, followed by what a “better” version would need to include based on common fan requests for this genre (ASMR/roleplay, dark fantasy, corruption/exorcism).
As with all RJ-coded content, the best way to support the creators and ensure "better" future releases is to purchase the work directly from official platforms like DLsite. This ensures you get the highest quality files and the complete booklet/art assets often included with the release.
Ensure that all spatial sound features (like Windows Sonic or Dolby Atmos) are turned off in your OS settings, as they conflict with the game's native audio engine.